The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/06
Wow! I LOVE this! I love the rythm and the flow, and all that it says. It's so, so Wow! Talent shines through on this one!
Yes, a beautiful poem filled with gritty, heartfelt truth! Love the image 'inhaled His comfort sweet'. Five live stanzas are really tricky to pull off in writing poetry and you've done it!
05/05/06
Now here's a unique way of dealing with the theme! Excellent job.
Definitely an interesting take here! Well done!
Sweet and simple - and heartfelt. Love the focus on comfort - feeling comfortable with self and God! This stanza is my favorite: "I love this freedom sweet
My Lord has given me.
I smile as I peer
Into the looking glass -
Content with what I see." VICTORY!!!! :-)