The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
I enjoyed this, although I had to read it a couple of times to 'get it' properly. To me, it wasn't quite clear initially to whom she was writing (her fiance or her father). I loved the quotation at the end, and the way you used it. My favourite phrase:
'the clash of duty and love spilling as salty tears from her eyes' - loved this.
05/12/06
This is really great. I experienced this in modern day so I could definitely identify!