The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
Ooooo, love this! I wish there were more, but there is says it all. Good job.
05/05/06
Got so excited that I left out a word: "what there is says it all". Blessings.
Really good poetry just unglues me, and you did it! Your second stanza is especially gorgeous. What a way to worship the King.
05/08/06
Although I do not care for rhyming couplets, you have handled this well. This might work as lyrics for a song, add a chorus.