The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
I liked the idea of a "connection" and Jesus "plugging" us into His love. Then comes the surge of power, right? :)
There are run-on sentences that make this a bit difficult to understand. I had to read and re-read to catch the drift.
Thanks for sharing, though!
05/09/06
I liked the idea of a "connection" and Jesus "plugging" us into His love. Then comes the surge of power, right? :)
There are run-on sentences that make this a bit difficult to understand. I had to read and re-read to catch the drift.
Thanks for sharing, though!