The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
What a wonderful picture of the struggle to forgive. The surprise ending was a clever twist. One little detail that struck me: "the drunk driver who had taken her sonís life". Good job.
Gripping! I could feel the heat of Rachel's wrestling match with God. How many times have each of us who call Jesus Lord entered that ring? You led me straight to the 'above-and-beyond-all-expectations' finale. Excellent work. Keep writing; you're in line to be published, for sure.