The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
This is a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your husband. Thanks so much for sharing it. It could use a little tightening. Some of the sentences are a little long and rambling. However, you conveyed your heart well.
05/09/06
I agree. This is a very sweet tribute to the love of your life. I also see some grammatical issues, but the story is very sweet.