The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this picture of your iron angel of a grandmother. Well done. I would love to read the details on how she overcame the hoodlums with love. Beautiful! I've got some Choctaw in me, too.
05/05/06
Beautiful. Short, but very sweet. Well done.
The title drew me right in, and your story did not disappoint! I, too, would dearly like to know how she handled the hoods...Thanks, great piece!
05/08/06
Very well done! A keeper.
05/08/06
Nice and tight, well done.
Good job. I especially like the phrase, "Gramma’s long black hair grayed as her steps slowed."
05/09/06
I liked this description of a Christian warrior in the faith. Very sweet. I join with the other two comments about the curiosity to know how she dealt with the hoodlums.
05/11/06
What a beautiful tribute to your grandmother. Her life has certainly been a blessing and an inspiration to you and your mother. There is so much pride in your writing of her. So very well done.