The Official Writing Challenge
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It took me a couple of reads to make the transitions (that was probably just me) but this is a very moving story and well-written. Congratulations.
Truth is certainly stranger than fiction. Through God's supernatural intervention the impossible becomes possible. I enjoyed the story, tragic as it was. Good writing skills.
Beautiful story. You did a good job on the characters.
Thank you for sharing this touching story. Kate~
It took me a while to catch on to your hint, but I finally got it...and I'm sure glad I read it. You write so well. Keep it up!
I, too, had trouble with the transitions, but I think the story was excellent. What an awesome God we serve.
Maybe it will work another way in my brother's case. He doesn't want our family to talk about God to his children....maybe they'll hear it somewhere else, though.
Thanks for sharing!
What a precious story. So heart wrenching, and so real. You have told it so well - and the bouquet of flowers she held until her last breath choked me up...Nice job, Edy!(so glad for this vacation break- so I can read those I've missed).ms
What a beautiful story. Sounds like God's grace at work.
This is a beautiful story. Well written, and offers much hope. Kudos, dear friend!