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04/27/06
A very touching story...It brought tears to my eyes!
04/28/06
Heartfelt story, I could feel his pain. Loved the ending message. Blessings!
04/29/06
A deft touch with the dialog, both with Paul and June, and with Paul and God.
Excellent. Believable story. Well done.
05/01/06
This struck such a personal chord. My father died of cancer 2 weeks after Christmas in 2001. So much of your story was my family's story! You did a fabulous job capturing the characters and the emotions. Very well done.
05/17/06
I'm blessed by the thought that our strength comes moment by moment. That is a beautiful highlight to this touching piece.