The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us! I loved it.
04/13/06
You did a beautiful job of "framing" this story-within-a-story with seamless transitions. Well done.
04/13/06
A really touching story. Thank you
04/13/06
Such a beautiful story...
Very touching and sweet.
04/14/06
Good transition from present to past to present. Touching story and well done.
Very nice story. Well written, good job.
04/18/06
An excellent story...and a great job of showing how Christ was able to break the cycle of dependency and addiction in their family - even for Dorothy. I have actually seen this exact same scenario played out in my family with a cousin, her daughter and granddaughter. It was sort of eerie reading it. A very strange coincidence...unless you and I are related? :>)
04/19/06
Very nicely written! You hit my emotions and carried me all the way through!:)