The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
This is a great piece of writing! I couldn't just skim this one, I read every word. Good job!
04/13/06
Love the way Jesus knew who he was even when he had forgotten himself. Thank you
It was the pov that held me... the 'outsiders eye' on how we treat the homeless, how easy it is to fall into the trap of doing it 'for our sakes' instead of theirs. God bless.
04/13/06
You've got a nice turn of phrase: "chock full of guppies", "filth and stink were their natural protcetion..." Good job on this story.
I really enjoyed reading this story. It held me from start to finish. A job well done!
Excellent writing...wonderful story. The best one I've read so far.
Very well written. Good job.
04/19/06
And this is true fulfillment.
Very nice. Thanks.
04/20/06
Congratulations on your win. I love reading your stories!
04/22/06
Now this is how we should all treat each other. Wonderful example, and beautifully written! Congratulations!