The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Good. A call to be counter-cultural. God always does things upside down (Except when we're expecting that, of course!!)Thank you for this
04/13/06
Good job. We felt the tension and saw her gradually moving through the process. Your "ducks" were all lined up, no sudden revelations or lightning strikes. Well done.
04/13/06
Nice story! Consider ending it with "Then she reached for the phone." Let your readers draw the conclusion that you have gently drawn them toward. Good job.
04/14/06
I like this a lot! Well written and a satisfying ending - it's not about anything except Jesus. Good job.
I love reading about people who make the right choices for the right reasons. Great story!