The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Love your spare use of language. My only complaint is that your POV changed half way through - Jesus was 'him' in the first half and then 'you' in the second half. Easily rectified, and otherwise excellent
04/13/06
Haiku! What a wonderful approach! They are harder than they look, and yours are beautifully crafted. And a lovely message to boot! Hooray!
04/14/06
Excellent writing. It is the most condensed version of the gospels I have ever read and yet the essence is rich and full. Great piece!
Beautiful! I really loved reading this. Great job!