The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Oooh, girl (I assume), you've got it bad!
Nice light writing. Just watch the it's/its
04/13/06
Oh yah! I'm with you all the way.
04/13/06
Very cute! Nothing quite as fulfilling as chocolate, is there? I'm with you, all the way (save a kiss for me...)
Mmmmm...chocolate! A nice light read - the story that is, not the chocolate!
04/14/06
Well written and only understood my other chocoholics. I've been there looking, searching, craving. My motto is "Chocolate, it's not just for breakfast anymore. I appreciate your description of how it is. Some might think it's unlikely to find chocolate as a source of fulfillment. I wonder what their weakness is?
You created the moment! We can all relate. Good job.