The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Unusual rhyming scheme/ stanza structure, made interesting reading. Good poem
04/13/06
Very nice. It could describe me. Good job.
04/13/06
Excellent, excellent! Love the structure of this poem, and its resolution is absolutely lovely.
04/14/06
Beautiful! It spoke directly to my heart. Being alone is not the same as being lonely. Being obedience to God while in this world is the key to fulfillment. I will read this piece over and over and drink in the water from the well of God's grace. Good job!
04/14/06
This is art! Beautiful, creative, deep and simple. :)
Touching...very touching. You've expressed something deep here. I felt lured into this person's heart, as if to find a treasure of pure gold!

Well done, and a good match for the topic. :-)
Laurie, this is absolutely beautiful. It's bittersweet message is deeply profound and so personal. Yes, the rhyme scheme and rhythm is perfect in helping to weave this poem's mesmerizing tone. It's in my favorites for sure!