The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
This is a very moving testimony, and a great way to use this week's theme.

You use the phrase "my life" quite frequently. You can sparkle up your writing by being aware of repeated phrases, and finding new ways to say them.

I love the final paragraph, and the phrase "sweet love and achievement".
04/15/06
Sorry, I missed this first time around. Inspiring testimony. Thank you