The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
Quite convicting!
Many people have wealth, nothing wrong with that right? So what went wrong with this man? What hardened his heart? I think I wanted more of "his voice" here because you set the stage so nicely, i wanted to know more.
02/28/05
We know this picture so well. They have more than they need of financial things, because they won't spend a dime on a deserving beggar. Is he happy though?