The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
aaaah...yes, I identify with this - you can come to within inches of murder and then one smile... Thanks for reminding me!
04/13/06
yes, and it's the same with grandchildren...even better, if that's possible! Good writing. Very readable.
04/13/06
A nice gentle pace, picking up the simple delight of motherhood even in the most trying of circumstances. A piece to relate to. Spacing the paragraphs would make this a little easier on the eye, but nicely done. God bless.
04/13/06
You really nailed all of those conflicting emotions, and the over-riding love! In the first paragraph, write out the word "and" instead of using the & symbol. Clever story, I felt the sleep-deprivation right along with you.
04/14/06
It's a daunting task to read a story that isn't separated by paragraphs - however, well done. Sometimes it's worth the effort.