The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
aaaah...yes, I identify with this - you can come to within inches of murder and then one smile... Thanks for reminding me!
yes, and it's the same with grandchildren...even better, if that's possible! Good writing. Very readable.
A nice gentle pace, picking up the simple delight of motherhood even in the most trying of circumstances. A piece to relate to. Spacing the paragraphs would make this a little easier on the eye, but nicely done. God bless.
04/13/06
You really nailed all of those conflicting emotions, and the over-riding love! In the first paragraph, write out the word "and" instead of using the & symbol. Clever story, I felt the sleep-deprivation right along with you.
04/14/06
It's a daunting task to read a story that isn't separated by paragraphs - however, well done. Sometimes it's worth the effort.