The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
Nicely dibe, I felt compelled to finish the story (which doesn't alway happen; several times I have left articles half-read if they don't catch my attention in the first few sentences.) I think I would have ended the article with the title; 'I stopped sleepwalking when I was sixteen...never failed to dress for dreams.' It would have been a nice flow. Other than that (and that, of course, is just opinion)--muy bueno!
Great job!
03/15/06
Watch out for it's / its and for switching tenses. But speaking of tense: Good job showing us the tension in your dream! Cute ending, too.
Nicely written. Good story with a humorous ending.
03/19/06
I failed to find any great message to mankind in this cute story of a long ago dream; however, it was a welcome relief from the mundane, and well written. Thanks for sharing.