The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
This is perfect, so beautifully written. Thank you.
03/13/06
Wonderful job of bringing the character's feelings to life.
03/14/06
What an incredible story!
03/15/06
Very, very good.
Pat Guy  
03/16/06
Okay - so this one won my heart! (need to brush these tears aside so I can see!) I'm sure this happened to so many during that time in America's History! You put us there girl! You did a great job!
03/16/06
Very nice story. Good job.
03/18/06
Great story, Cassie! Such a tender, poignant piece! The ending was perfect...that precious lock of auburn hair. Beautifully told!!
03/20/06
Beautiful! This was really touching. I always also enjoy being transported to another time and place. Thanks.