The Official Writing Challenge
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This is perfect, so beautifully written. Thank you.
Wonderful job of bringing the character's feelings to life.
What an incredible story!
Very, very good.
Okay - so this one won my heart! (need to brush these tears aside so I can see!) I'm sure this happened to so many during that time in America's History! You put us there girl! You did a great job!
Very nice story. Good job.
Great story, Cassie! Such a tender, poignant piece! The ending was perfect...that precious lock of auburn hair. Beautifully told!!
Beautiful! This was really touching. I always also enjoy being transported to another time and place. Thanks.