The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooh! I love a mystery, and this galloped away with my attention completely captive. This is a great job of story-telling. Thanks!
I loved the way you built the intensity. No letting up until the very end.
pk, I was scared! Great job of producing suspense in your readers. Awesome writing. And a great messege of how bad things can turn out for good!
I love seeing the hand of God in that past paragraph! Good job!
Very well done - the nasty co-worker. Be wary of wolves in sheep's clothing. Good, exciting read with a happy ending :)
Good job. I like the suspense.
I'm glad that everything worked out in the end for her! Poor girl....

Nice story! You did a great job portraying the hand of God in the matter.
This one gave me chills -good job
Wow. I got chills on this too! Well written. You had me cued right into it!