The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the opening sentence: "The angel sat poised ready to act, with outstretched wings glittering like a pool of crushed diamonds." Amazing!

Overall I really definitely enjoyed this story. I loved the concept, the use of the topic, and the ending!
You defiantely have a gift! Your writing is incredible. The story was superb. Fantastic job!
Good stuff! I was captivated. It definately reminded me of the power of prayer. Well done.
Well done! One tiny thing: its / it's are frequently confused. "It's" always means "it is"--a good way to figure out which one to use. Really compelling story.