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03/13/06
A well-told story on a too familiar experience we all face sooner or later in life. Thanks be to God we can still "go home" in our memories. Thank you for a good read with a lighthearted touch on a sad subject!
I really enjoyed this. You did a good job of "reminiscing"
Great, great story. I loved your visual descriptions you wrote. the reader feels like that at Camp 12. Great job!
03/15/06
Very well done--you've done an outstanding job both with the atmosphere of the place, and with writing good, realistic dialog.
03/15/06
I agree that you did a great job at describing what can be a difficult time in life. A very realist picture of the setting, too. I got a kick out of the "rocket scientist" son. :)
03/16/06
Lovely writing. A human interest story with the emphasis on both words.