The Official Writing Challenge
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That story (Samson) always makes me want to shake some sense into him! Good job in writing this.
03/15/06
Looks like you had some words left, but you didn't give your readers details of that slam-bam ending! Good job with getting into Sam's head.
03/16/06
I enjoyed this, but I wonder if it would have benefitted from a litle more time on the 'action' bits, and a litle less on narrative comments (which can sound a touch 'preachy') - actions are louder than words, etc
An interesting read, nonetheless
03/16/06
Nice take on Sam and Dee, but I would have liked an ending that described the fall of the columns - from Sam's sheer strength. Nice read :)