The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
Good writing. A little conflict, a touch of humor and a problem solved with a surprise ending. Good stuff.
This was a really good stroy. Fast moving, GREAT writing an a clever use of the theme. All in all-Fabulous!!!
03/15/06
Definitely one of my favorites!
03/16/06
I particularly loved the 3rd and 4th paragraphs. Some fantastic writing.
03/16/06
Very nice and good use of the name Seconchance. :)
03/16/06
I loved this! Your descriptions were vivid and you kept me in suspence yet balanced it with playful ligtness...I didn't know it I would be reading a horror story, comedy, suspense or what...that is what I loved about it the most! Great job...hope you win!
03/17/06
Very well written, loved the humorous ending! well done :)
I would love to see this fleshed out into a longer peice. The description at the begining is very good. It sets the scene and pulls you into the story. Good character development as well. We need more. 750 words is never enough, is it1