The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
An awesome entry. Not only is there a lot to think about as the conversation progresses, but it is very real.

You did well with this. The ending leaves us hanging. Although it seems that this little life is doomed, there is the hope that what was said will be taken to heart.
02/21/05
Excellent work. This is a winner in my book.
02/21/05
Wow. Absolutely wonderful. Great stuff. Why is this on level 2? Stop being so bashful. I've read alot of fiction in my day, and this one's got what it takes.
02/21/05
Wow. Great job mixing humor with a tough subject. Hits the point hard without being preachy. I'll look for more from you!
02/21/05
Wow! Great work! The dialogue kept me moving to the last line!
This writer has conquered a very difficult technique -- bare bones story that communicates volumes through only dialog. I could hear them speaking, it rings so true without preaching. Well done!
Wow...that was awesome.
You inspire me to write better. Keep it up. You are sure to be a winner!
What can I say? The others have said it all!
Hi joy!

What can I say, You are a friend until the end!

Great dialogue! Keep up the good work. Let me know if kim had the bundle of joy. Smile