The Official Writing Challenge
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This story truly astounded me. I though it was terrific in so many ways. One of the best I've read yet. I think you have a good shot of placing!
03/15/06
Very powerful, and well-written.
03/16/06
Reaaly well written. What a fab first line!
03/16/06
I must be the only one confused by this. Did this thief kill the couple's son?
Well written, emotional story. Good job.
03/17/06
Well done, you take the reader step by step to his realization.