The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! This was beautiful! Great job!
03/15/06
Some very lovely images here. I think your poem will flow more smoothly if you combined some short lines into longer ones--as it is, your reader "halts" after only 3 or 4 words, and the meanings are compromised. Nice job with the topic.
03/16/06
Amen.