The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sad story. I liked the glimmer of hope Andre had towards the end.
What a great character! I'd read more of Andre's story.
I found it a little odd for parents to leave such a weak and young child home alone, but that aside, you shared his pain well and made me sympathize with him. Good job.
I thought your description of the boy's predicament was very vivd. I did wonder, though, if his voice was a little old for eight years old? Good read, though. Thanks