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I really liked the comparison of opening a locket to unlocking the mysteries of God. I also liked the reminder that we have to be mature enough to sit still to attain those secrets.
You wrote beautifully. I would've loved to have read more about the child's locket. Great spiritual application.
03/13/06
Nice analogy and great devotional!
03/14/06
Very encouraging. a very well written piece.
03/16/06
Very beautiful! Consider ending it with "...God's unconditional love." That's where the "punch" is.
03/16/06
Excellent. Bravo. I like the use of a locket in this. Very readable.
This article is very interesting and written very well. Thank you
03/19/06
Wonderful! This illustrated the faith of a child so well. It also spoke to me about the condition our heart should be in when we approach our Lord.
03/19/06
A truly delightful piece of artistic writing. I loved it! Simplistic, short and to the ultimate point...that WE are important to God! Great!