The Official Writing Challenge
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This was pretty good, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed. Maybe if there were another sentence or two to show the connection of why they had all stayed and their faith? But overall, nice job.
03/13/06
This is a nice retelling of the Biblical account. Good job!
Great take on this story. I loved it coming from the POV of the jailor.
03/16/06
Wonderful piece of writing.
03/16/06
This is good. I like the POV, it gives a different view of the Biblical account. :)
03/16/06
I agree, I liked this very much.
03/19/06
A great rewrite of the Bible story! The only suggestion I have is to put the Scripture Reference in a footnote for those who are not familiar with the Bible...so they can read this incident for themselves. Great story! Very well written, and a "come hither" Title to lure us in! Well done!