The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this stanza: "Out of that cookie jar, Sweetheart
Youíre getting much to fat.
All the more for you to love
And chipmunk cheeks to pat."

I could also relate to the checkbook one. :) Very cute with a good message.
03/08/06
Lovely poem with a sound message. Christ invites us to enter at any time.