The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/06
Thank you. How important to come to God with our entry credentials intact! I wonder if you should have kept it simpler and used EITHER us entering the Kingdom OR Jesus entering our hearts, but not both, which kinda mixes the metaphor perhaps? Maybe not.
03/12/06
Needs a little work to make the flow better. A lot of repeat does nothing to get your point across. Your subject is established in the first few sentences after that explore or it expound on it. Keep working at it, that's what we are all doing.
God Bless
02/22/08
This is an excellent Bible Study/Devotional! Thank you for sharing it.