The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a cute poem. I was just a bit confused about what was happening in the beginning and had to go back after I understood at the end of the poem. There were also a couple of grammar and spelling errors. However, the idea was clever and the poem well rhymed.
Very funny! A couple of mispelled words, but you have a gift for rhyme.
You got that style down pat! I kept wondering how did it happen and then slowly you let us in on the trick! Fun to read!