The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/06
Can't fool mothers! Good job.
03/10/06
Cute story - reminds me of being young and finding the Christmas list for each of us. The excitement faded for Christmas morning and since then, I've NEVER looked for a gift early!
03/10/06
I think this is really well written. You've captured so well the breathless exhilaration of the little girl as she steals into her mother's bedroom.