The Official Writing Challenge
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Boy, was that interesting. I wonder is there a scripture about Daniel being an enunch? I'm not sure the first sentence about "another nail in coffin" was important to the story though. Also I might have mentioned how many years Carl was blessed before the funeral ending. Good writing.
Interesting was a bit hard to follow because it covered so many years so quickly. However, you had an creative take on a Bible verse not often thought about...I agree about the first two paragraphs. I couldn't figure out how they connected.