The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/06
A very good story of God's love, using something that was negative to a child and not only saving her but the mother too. The first paragraph does not let us know it is the Mom speaking, rewrite that and rework paragraphs and this could be very good.
I thought this one was very creative and written extremely well. I loved the messege behind it. Good use of the topic.
03/10/06
I hope this is true! Isn't it amazing how GOd works out of the box? Thank you for blessing me today with a real 'Wow'.