The Official Writing Challenge
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You made this character truly unlikable--good job! All the vices were woven in nicely.
It was a beautifully written article, but I would've liked to have seen some hope or "life" brought to Dylan's life at the end. Or at least more of a comparison between the lives of himself and his family. The joy they may have, even though they don't live with luxuries and then compare it to Dylan's life.