The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/06
So well written! The mother's anguish for her son just pulled the tears out of my own eyes, as if I were the one in the mother's shoes. Thank you.
03/02/06
Wonderful! I wish I had read this sooner. It was very good, full of depth and a nice ending! I also liked the beginning as you had me wanting to read more just to see where he went.
03/05/06
This is good! Finally I read one that gets my vote. Surely you will win this week. Well done.