The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
A cute story--it fizzled a bit at the end; perhaps you could have included earlier that the mother had a particular disgust for stray hairs, so that the "DNA sample" (very clever) would be even more ironic. Fun read!
03/05/06
I had almost forgot the title but you did manage to bring in before the end of the story.
03/05/06
Sorry, correction *bring it in*