The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
Nicely done, I like it a lot. :)
02/28/06
Very emotive poem. You showed us how vulnerable she was. The fourth verse was very convicting.
02/28/06
Sorry - it was the fifth verse. I can't count!
03/01/06
Great writing.
I wonder if it would have had even more 'bite' if you hadn't given away with the title the fact that it was a Biblical story - we'd have been more surprised at its unfolding.
03/02/06
Nice and descriptive. Good work.
03/02/06
"Hope unsought, unexpected caught at her throat..."

Beautiful for its meaning, and for its poetic characteristics. A lovely, lovely poem.
Nicely written. Good job.
03/05/06
This was wonderfully written.
03/05/06
Touching and true.