The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
I liked how it takes the reader through the perspective of how we are as human beings from the beginning of our lived through until the end. It was very insightful, perhaps even more so due to it's simplicity in wording.
02/28/06
I liked the way you took us through different phases of life showing us how much we change our perspective. It is sad that many people never get to the point of realising how much they need God. The title seems a curious choice.
03/02/06
Interesting, I was wondering about the title also. Emmanuel means "God with us" I might want to work that end your article somewhere.
03/02/06
Sorry I meant "You" might want to work that in somewhere.