The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
Wonderful! I especially love the little twist at the end. It just goes to show that you can never be too sure just who you're helping. ;)
02/28/06
That was an instant answer to prayer. Your use of dialogue was good and it kept me reading. I have to admit that I did not find the story easy to believe - it just seemed too unlikely a scenario to be something I could relate to. I loved the title.
03/02/06
This may be just a tad implausible, but it's certainly well-written, and a great feel-good ending.
03/04/06
Very good. I like surprise endings.
03/05/06
Okay you got me! Wow, way to build the tension, and the end was a doozy!
03/05/06
Well done with the tension and build up to the happy ending :)
Good job! You deserve the "Highly Recommended" award!