The Official Writing Challenge
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Our life with Jesus has its ups and downs but we know that the end will be better than the beginning. Thank you for sharing your lovely prose!
I really like your "fairy tale" analogy, and your use of King-ly terms. This poem rhymes sometimes, and sometimes not, which confuses the reader; consider an edit to make it one kind of poem or the other. Nice job, a sweet poem!