The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is so beautifully eloquent in expressing the heart that is in the depths of hurt and disappointment! The image of God's loving voice is perfect as the one and only source of true healing. I love this poem's bittersweet loveliness!
02/22/06
This is wonderful! I especially love "I know He will provide enough." Perfect.
02/22/06
You speak from a place in us all when confusion and questions won't let go - where it's dark and lonely. But these words, 'Your healing journey I will lead;
I値l be your confidant, your friend. and then ... Though tired, worn and beaten up,
I値l keep on going make the choice...' will minister and give the hope one needs to keep holding on. A beautiful flow of reaching out and God taking hold. Excellent writing.
Excellent! Clap, clap, clap...just superb! Love these lines: "In time, you値l walk in peace and joy. Please trust Me now for what to do." You're becoming a master at this, Laurie. :-)