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02/21/05
Nicely woven lesson in this story. I also like the way you build the story around the 'deprived' little girl. Good work!
02/22/05
Love this story! Excellently well written with a great lesson. You made a painful truth pleasant to read about and apply. I'm afraid we all have bouts of "accidental" selfishness.
02/22/05
The story was delightful and the moral intense. I mean, don't we become selfish more by accident than on purpose which is why it is such a tricky trait to change?
02/26/05
I especially liked the "empty bowl of purpose" -- good job!
02/26/05
What a great anecdote and you told it so well, so personably. Good luck!