The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/06
Cute. One wee typo that caught my eye: "It made we want" instead of "it made me want", Well done.
02/21/06
Actually, I don't think that's wrong. It is the start of a new comment that stands separate.

At least that's my story...and I'm stickin's to it.

LOL.

Dan

02/22/06
Short and sweet--I really liked this. I'm not sure if you needed to leave the 'g' off "fixin'", since none of the rest of the story was written in dialect. Your narrator was very charming, and the lesson was precious.