The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/06
You did a very good job with the voice in this end-of-life stream of consciousness. I think you can eliminate all the quotation marks; since the "speaker" is the same throughout, they're unnecessary. A well-written cautionary tale.
02/26/06
I agree about the quotations but that's why we're here right, to help each other. I liked this very much and I hope you keep writing.