The Official Writing Challenge
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Darling, we all make mistakes. There is no condemnation! The key is it's less frequent than before keep looking on to Jesus the perfecter of your faith.
02/22/06
This is poignant and beautifully written. I like the reference to pine. One small note: watch out for to / too. A lovely, heartfelt verse.
02/25/06
I am kind of lost here. You say "too bad it's not my flesh" I am just wondering why it would be better if it was?
02/27/06
Nice and real. If you want more comments you need to join the message boards and leave some hints on Thursdays:)