The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
Well, well done! A great job of creative writing. You had us right there with you experiencing every emotion. This should make it somewhere!
02/21/06
This is excellent!
Excellent writing! Great Job.
02/22/06
I went through a similiar situation with my father so I might be bias but I thought it was great, but I am the daughter after all.
02/24/06
Great use of the repeated phrase to break up the conversation. Excellent, excellent writing!!!
I love the details of straying thoughts. I never can concentrate on just the phone call, even when it is good news. I thought that was entirely humand and excellent bit of writing.
02/27/06
Congrats. I enjoyed your story. The repetition was very effective. Unfortunately, many of us can relate to the theme.
02/27/06
I really enjoyed this and the way you wrote it. You made it very real and true to life, it was very effective.

Congrats!